Tuesday, September 30, 2008

Book Scorage for Wednesday books

I’ve decided that I really like our book pimpage/review/whatever you want to call it Wednesday feature.  So we’re gonna keep it.  Therefore I was puttering around in my own little brainspace and considering important information I want to be able to give out about a book all in one place.  This is the ratings issue of doing game reviews bleeding over, but no numbers so it’s much more flexible.  My new information/scoring system goes as follows:

Genre:  Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Romance, Urban Fantasy, etc.
Ages:  YA or Adult etc.
Content:  Kinda goes with the age thing, but stuff that might be a turn off…or maybe a turn on, pick your poison.
Overall:  Buy, Borrow, Junk

Then we’ll keep posting review quotes, covers and back copy. 

If you have questions or want to put a book forward as a star for book Wednesday, which may bleed over to book Tuesday but depends on how many titles I want to comment on, let us know in the comments!

~JSB

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Monday, September 29, 2008

Money… yes that’s what I want. Money!

*Does a jigging happy dance of joy*

It’s pay day! It’s PAY DAY! It’s pay day!

Yes, I’m happy. I’ve been without a paycheck for 3 months now and been scrimping, scraping and saving to do my best to get by on 2 credit cards, a lot of articles about lace frong wigs, bling bling and used cars and every last cent of my hard earned savings. (RIP Savings Account, I will miss you!) and working my tail off teaching Spanish. I’ve had a job since August, but the colleges don’t pay until Sept 30 and Oct 1.

But… I get paid today. So I’m really happy. I figure many writers can commiserate with the feast-famine, suffering-joy of the erratic paycheck. It’s just such a wonderful thing when someone decides to reward your hard work with a little money.

So today… I suggest everyone look at their paycheck, smile at it and remember that not everyone gets one of those pretty lovely things all the time. I think I will treat myself to something that isn’t soup for dinner! Oooo and maybe I’ll go see a movie.

It’s pay day!

~Kris

PS: Thanks to my grandfather, father and mother for feeding me through these few months, and Liz, Liesl, Chad… thank you for the few meals you kindly provided me! (And of course the wonderful treks through German Board Games battling Sauron! woohoo)

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Friday, September 26, 2008

First Lines

It’s me again, hello dedicated readers! By the by, toss us a line in comments now and again so we know who you are! Even if you just want to say hello.

Anyway as I tried to work on either my work in progress and a preview piece to my tiger-detective work for character work, it dawned on me what I find both my biggest writing bane and my biggest writing envy. That would be “First Lines”. I can’t tell you how many times I’ve rewritten the first few lines of a piece, because I’m looking for that kick butt first line (or lines). For me, the opening sentences have to have three basic elements.

  1. In medias res — It pulls you directly into the story’s action
  2. Immediate setting and character – self explanatory
  3. That “El no sé que” — a Spanish idea for the “Just something special”

How do you know if an opening line has “el no sé que?” Well it’s just a feeling, that little tingle you get when you read the first line and go “Damn, that’s good!” You just know it when you find the perfect opening for a story. The opening words just give you a little tingle of delight, because it works. I wish I could explain more, maybe some of you have those words. Some writers simply keep on writing, and worry aobut the kick-butt first line later, but for me that’s what sets the entire tone of a piece. I can struggle throught he rest, but I want those opening lines to work.

Here’s some examples for you:

Jana’s work, currently out to an agent:

“My name is Misery.

It’s not the name my parents gave me.  My name was AnnaLisa StormCrow, which I always thought was pretty. It looks good on a gravestone, all flourish and easy read.”
– Misery Loves Company by Janalee Stocks

    I love it! You get the character’s ethnicity, her world-view and the irreverant tone in a few words. And you’re immediately posed with questions that beg you to read more.

    Now that I’m dead I know everything.
 
The Penelopiad by Margaret Atwood

    It drew me in immediately, because it establishes a conspiratorial tone and again, you’re going… okay what’s the underworld like, who is dead?

    ”The trouble with unknown enemies is that they are so difficult to Identify”

       Through the open windows of the ballroom the soft night breeze of Egypt cooled the flushed faces of the dancers. Silk and satin glowed; jewels sparkled; gold braid glittered; the strains of sweet music filled the air. The New Year’s Eve Ball at Shepheard’s Hotel was always an outstanting event in Cairo’s social season, but the dying of this december day marked an ending of greater than usual import. – The Hippopotamus Pool — Elizabeth Peters

    Immediately you know the where, and get a good idea of the when, judging by the descriptions of the outfits and the mention of “balls” and social season. The name of the chapter, which is actually the “first line” gives you the in-medias-res. It’s also, to regular readers, one of Amelia’s aphorisms so it gives a laugh to followers of the series.

    My suffering left me sad and gloomy.
     Academic study and the steady mindful practice of religion slowly brought me back to life.

The Life of Pi by Yann Martel

   The entirety of the book’s theme is summed up here, in these two lines. It’s concise, easy to read, and you want to know more about the narrator.

 Blood leaves no stain on a Warden’s grey cloak.
 I didn’t know that until the day I watched Morgan, second in command of the White Council’s wardens, lift his sword over the kneeling form of a young man guilty of the practice of black magic.

 
Proven Guilty  by Jim Butcher

   In-medias-res if I’ve ever seen it! Action starts right away, and immediately pulls you into wondering who and what Wardens are. (if you are already a fan of the books, you know this, and you want to know more details of why the cloaks are impervious to blood, and who has gotten the Warden’s ire). The second sentences gives you setting, and more intrigue about what’s going on.

I sat at my table in my shadowy kitchen, staring down a bottle of Boone’s Farm Hard Lemonade when a magic fluctuation hit. My wards shivered and died, leaving my home stripped of defenses.

Magic Bites Ilona Andrews

 You get an immediate idea of the main character, a drinker and probably not much of a cooker since most people tend to want airy, bright and cheerful kitchen’s if they spend a lot of time in it.The word shadowy has an ominous connotation. Then when you get the influx of the magic and the hint that the speaker is a mage, it helps with the immediate setting. You also get action, wondering why this person needs defenses.

~Kristen

 

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Wednesday, September 24, 2008

Wednesday Book Review: Magic Bites

Welcome back friends, neighbors, bookies…wait…that doesn’t sound right.  Book lovers?  Book-a-dores?  Something like that.  Today’s book feature goes out to Ilona Andrews and the Kate Daniel series book numero uno, Magic Bites.

To be perfectly honest Magic Bites is not my favorite Kate book.  I like Magic Burns better and from the snippets I’ve seen I’m drooling over the possibilities for Magic Strikes.  However, Magic Bites is the book which gets it all started, introducing us to Kate a magic torn Atlanta and a unique view of the world through the eyes of Ilona Andrews.  One of the most fascinating things about this author is that she is actually a they, a husband and wife team who write together.  I can’t think of anything more fun than a job working side by side with my sweetie…though I could see creative differences making for some tense times around the house.

Getting back to the book…  Kate Daniels is a mercenary in a world where tides of magic and technology ebb and flow with absolutely no regularity.  When the magic is high the world goes nuts and when it goes away it doesn’t always clean up well after itself, so Kate does…for a fee.  I like Kate a lot.  She’s a butt-kicking for goodness, smart mouthed heroine, but one who isn’t afraid to still be a woman and to be likable.  She’s honest to goodness NICE to people which often gets her just as far as pointing her sword at their noses…though in Curran’s case, the Beast lord who I love to drool over, maybe the sword is the better option.  Definitely a must read for fans of Urban Fantasy, and anyone disappointed by cookie cutter heroines.  There are some gorey bits, so if you’re weak of stomach beware, but it’s still totally worth the read!

My score (The score thing is new, I’ll explain tomorrow):  Buy it!

Atlanta would be a nice place to live, if it weren’t for the magic…

When the magic is up, rogue mages cast their spells and monsters appear, while guns refuse to fire and cars fail to start.  But then technology returns, and the magic recedes as unpredictably as it arose, leaving all kinds of paranormal problems in its wake.

Kate Daniels is a down-on-her-luck mercenary who makes her living cleaning up these magical problems.  But when Kate’s guardian is murdered, her quest for justice draws her into a power struggle between two strong factions within Atlanta’s magic circles.

The Masters of the Dead, necromancers who can control vampires, and the Pack, a paramilitary clan of shapechangers, blame each other for a series of bizarre killings – and the death of Kate’s guardian may be part of the same mystery.  Pressured by both sides to find the killer, Kat realizes she’s way out of her league – but she wouldn’t have it any other way.

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Teaser Tuesday

Here is a work in progress, teaser. This is the opening scene of a Urban Fantasy-Mystery novel that J and I are playing with. This is my opening entry into the book, which will be set in India. This means, of course, a lot of research!


* * * * *

            “Look, I’ve been told you have a knack for finding people, Mr. Winter.” The dark haired man leaned forward, resting on his desk. Edward frowned, forcing himself not to look at the smears he knew were being left on the black glass.

            “I don’t work for your sort. I’m a free cat.” Barely containing a sneer he clenched his fists, although he really wanted to extend his claws and rip the sorcerer’s throat out. Power hungry, and willing to bargain with any sort of higher being to gain power, Ed didn’t trust their brand of blood magic. It always came with a leash.

              “That’s not what I hear.” A smile curved the man’s lips, making his expression crueler rather than more pleasant. He slid a folded envelope across the table, “And you won’t be working for me, but rather my employer. Jayna took something that isn’t hers, and it must be returned. Don’t worry, you’ll be paid handsomely. She doesn’t want to compel you.” Anymore than she already was… The words didn’t have to be spoken, they were implied. What did this mysterious “she” have on him?

            He took the envelope and immediately an overwhelming scent of patchouli oil and jasmine filled his nostrils. His vision clouded with a desert vista and a blue skinned woman, hair dancing around her shoulders, highlighted with flickers of dancing flame. He could almost feel her hand on his shoulder…

            Edward jerked back snarling and tossed the envelope on the table, claws sprouting from his knuckles. Who the hell had known that after three wishes, you owed another three back to the Djinn. Unless you had control of the Djinn’s anchor, they were the master and you were the slave. Fancy, really, how legend told another story.

            “What does Amra want? No matter what she’s giving you, the price is too high.” Another flash of blue skin passed through Ed’s mind’s eye, how her touch burned like the fire that she was born from.

            The Englishman smiled, sitting back in his chair and shrugging. “I have power, more than any other sorcerer. I can stand up to full mages. I haven’t seen a downside yet. So you’ll take the case? He glanced at Ed’s claws, arching an eyebrow.

            Edward focused his strength, and drew the claws back into flesh, hiding behind a shield of humanity. “I want to talk to Amra directly.”

            “Not possible. She’s… not manifesting. She’ll see you tonight, though… ” He nodded to the letter, “Make yourself a nice tea, chamomile. She’ll be in your dreams.”

            Edward glared at the letter, as if he could stare down Amra’s spirit-impression left in the paper. Son of a bitch.  “Fine.” He growled, “That’s only one more I’ll owe her.”

            The sorcerer leaned forward and offered a hand, drawing attention to the silver and gold slave chain jingling on his forearm and the spikes that dug into the sorcerer’s flesh, turning it red purple.  Ed ignored the hand and the Englishman laughed. “Details of the case are in the envelope, Jayna was one of Amra’s favorites and she’d been bound to her Ladyship for over two centuries. Before she left, she tried to recruit the rest of us, saying she knew where to locate Amra’s lamp.”

            Edward’s gaze jerked to the sorcerer, “Son of a bitch!”

The sorcerer sneered, “I see you get the trouble we’re in, cat. A genie is bloody powerful, the perfect servant. But humans are greedy, so the wishes get bigger and bigger and if they hold the Djinn’s anchor no wish can be refused. Kingdoms fall, storms destroy and the Djinn’s essence is depleted until they simply cease to exist. Sure there were some wise masters, spaced the wishes 2 or 3 at a time… but slavery is still slavery.”

No wonder Amra wouldn’t manifest. Disembodied, she had no power and also couldn’t be controlled. “It’s been centuries since the last genie lamp surfaced.”

“Amra knows Jayna’s got help, someone strong enough to shield her from the slave-bond. And she knows likely places where Amra would hide her lamp.” Edward decided not to point out the irony of an enslaved race turning slaver.

            Tapping the envelope on the table, Edward watched the ticking second hand on his wall clock. Who wouldn’t be tempted by controlling a genie, but the stories couldn’t be too far from the truth; a vengeful genie could find ways to obey the letter of a wish and still sabotage the Master. Ed wasn’t Muslim, but the Koran had it right; genies are evil spirits. He regretted most of his dealings with Amra.

            He’d probably regret this too, “What can I call you?”

            The sorcerer smiled, “I’m James. Amra will be most relieved to know you’re on the case.”

            “I’ll need a contract stating this will free me of one of my favors owed her.”

            “Done. You can discuss terms with her tonight.” Edward really didn’t want Amra in his head, but she’d never asked permission before. She’d not listen to a thing he said tonight.

            “Does Amra have any idea who may be helping Jayna?”

            “The Emperor Pride.”

            Now Edward did snarl, a feline growl escaping his throat. “Interlopers…”

            “Amra heard the pride had an eye on the Mahim Preserve, so you see this is in both your interests. She can help you maintain your territory, but if they have a genie enslaved…”

            Edward pocketed the letter, rumbling another low growl. “They wouldn’t stop at just the Mahim… or even Mumbai” The Asiatic breed of lions had as much of a grudge against humanity as tigers did… Edward simply disagreed with the idea of genocide as retribution.

            “As I said, you’ll be paid handsomely.” A ghostly caress played over his chest, but Edward ignored Amra’s impression, putting the letter from his mind. He’d not had much time for women lately, but giving in to Amra was playing with fire. Beautiful, useful… and deadly when out of your control; and Amra was never under control.

            He pulled a card from his pocket and slid it to James, “Call me if there’s more you need. I’ll fax a standard contract to the Second Chance Talent Agency.”

            “I’ll be waiting for it.” Apparently a quick learner, James left the office without bothering to offer a hand again. Edward watched the clouded glass for a long time, brooding. There was a reason he’d stuck to cases involving cheating housewives and embezzling employees lately, usually no one tried to nuke you for exposing that sort of thing. Or more specifically, usually no one had the power to nuke you with that sort of thing. Maybe his mother was right; he should stick to the family business, serving tea and sushi to businessmen. The Blue Orchid was solid income, he’d never live richly… but no one would try to turn him into barbecue tiger either.

            But neither was he a tame tiger. Wild blood ran in his veins, and if he wasn’t being paid to be nosy, he’d be prowling the neighbor’s rooftops and rifling their garbage. Edward was reminded of the smudged desk and he pulled the Windex from a drawer and he fastidiously wiped away the fingerprints until the black glass gleamed again. Flicking off the light, Ed locked his office door and headed into the alleyway. A steady rain fell, turning the streets into a mess of dirt, slick oily deposits and refuse he simply didn’t want to identify. The faintest scent of jasmine still teased his senses, reminding Edward that his life was about to get a little too damn interesting.

~Kristen

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Tuesday, September 23, 2008

I like Scavenger Hunts too!

Today is a musing blog, it came to mind when I was in the library at the University this afternoon. I was just thinking that you can decide a book worm by someone who likes the /smell/ of books. Have you ever noticed how old books have that… yellow-paper brittle smell, it’s kinda like those fallen leaves on an October evening. Then there’s that nice inky-clean plasticky smell of those neatly bound brand new books, with the shiny pages? Usually new textbooks have that inky chemical smell, but I still like it. Then there’s the neutral paper smell of your regular paper back book, where you can just barely smell the glue and the ink. And when you’re in a library, the whole area smells of those various book-smells.

Today I walked around just looking at the sheer variety of covers, tall ones, short ones… red, gold, blue, yellow… and I really just wanted to start grabbing at random, find a corner and read. I think I just don’t spend enough time in libraries. So much of life is the run-here, run there… clean, write, work… earn money, that you forget the sheer weight of time, knowledge and peace that seems to pervade a library. The UH one is labyrinthine, with you having to take different elevators in different sections to reach the various levels of the library. They label them with colors too, so the walls change from brown, to red, to blue… and the hallways twist and turn. I found a hidden area with books up on the 6th floor, after walking through endless empty shelves, and lonely study desks. It was kind of eerie! Think of a room the size of your average high school gym full of empty shelves!

Jorge Luis Borges used to use libraries as a metaphor for human life; each person or thought as a book and the endless variety an allegory for life. Walking around today, I think I agree with him.

It’s also pretty fun to use the call number to hunt down a slim battered tome no one has looked at, probably, since it was printed in the 20s! It’s an easy sense of accomplishment.

~Kristen

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Friday, September 19, 2008

Point of View in storytelling

Today I thought back on all of my old English classes when we analyzed books by their point of view. If we remember back to those days the three points of view commonly discussed were First Person, Third Person Limited and Third Person Omnicient. The “Classic Novels” of the past were usually written in the Third Person Omnicient point of view with the others far less common. It recently struck me, though, how I haven’t read anything in Omnicient in a very long time. The most recent Omnicient novel I can think of was the “Alchemist” which had that sense of classic fairytale about it.

Modern storytelling seems to prefer a limited point of view, or a serial limited point of view. And I’ve seen that first person novels are becoming increasingly popular. What I was thinking about today is what is the most enjoyable narrador for a novel. With each you have to sacrifice something, the omnicient view tends to be more distant while the limited point of view tends to stop a writer from examining situations that the character featured would not understand. A serial limited point of view rings the trouble of balance in the novel, how much should you focus on one character or another? Should the balance be equal, or can you split it up.

I tend to prefer a serial limited story, because I like to see the interior lives of all the characters. A novel series I love is the Song of Ice and Fire series which brings a variety of individual character’s stories together and never focusses on one or another character. Every character has an opportunity to add to the story, letting the reader see events that wouldn’t be otherwise available and often contrasting points of view. It seems more cinematic, giving the reader the complete story. The Amelia Peabody series uses one character’s primary point of view in the first person, but interjects contrasting texts with another character’s  first person point of view. I think this enhances the text, helping the reader to get more of the story.

I think it comes down to the following guidelines on point of view:

For a novel of a smaller scope the single point of view helps to limit the information  and add to the reader’s suspense, they discover things as the protagonist does.

A novel with multiple protagonists or with a more cinematic feel should go for a seriel limited point of view, giving the reader the enjoyment of knowing more than the other characters.

A novel with an expansive, epic-like storyline or a children’s story or anything that wants to use a very visible narrator’s voice should return to the third person omnicient, it has the tone of classic storytelling and allows the reader to get important information without over focussing on one or another character.

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Wednesday, September 17, 2008

Wednesday Book Review: Dead To Me

Heya there boys and girls.  It’s Wednesday which means another Wednesday Book Pimpage coming directly at you.  Make sure to duck so you don’t hit your head on any low hanging books.

This week’s book of note is Dead To Me by Anton Strout…Anton, and not Anthony which I goofed up on another blog.  I’m so shamed.  Dead To Me is the first of Anton’s urban fantasy series about Simon Canderous a semi reformed psychometric thief.  Dead To Me was released last year and available at all your favorite online (here’s linkage to Amazon and Barnes and Noble) and brick book sellers, or at least you can get them to order it in. Deader Still, the next volume is scheduled to be out in February of 2009, so mark your calendars.

I purchased Dead To Me shortly after it was released, and for, one reason or another, it sat on my TBR pile for ages.  When I got around to reading the book I wondered why I let it sit so long!  It’s a fun romp, with a fast well written style and pace.  I loved Simon and found it easy to sink into his head, not literally, and the world around him.  It can’t be easy being the rookie at the Department of Extraordinary Affairs, after all.  I then foisted the book off on my husband who had this to say:

Dead To Me is a fast paced and both light hearted and poignant story of a rookie cop in the “paranormal police force”.  As a reformed thief with paranormal powers the lead character Simon who has to learn the ins and outs of office politics all while struggling to balance his personal life, solve the murder of a beautiful ghost, explore his new skills, and figure out how not to fall in love with the enemy. - Bryan R Brown

So there’s our kudos.  Definitely a Buy it Book.  :)  Besides, it has an awesome cover.  Just take a look below.

Welcome to the Department of Extraordinary Affairs Other  Division- New York’s answer to the underfunded world of paranormal investigation.  It’s a job caught up in red tape, memos, and office politics, but its becoming par for the course for recent recruit Simon Canderous.  After a life of petty crime and twenty four years of watching his power of psychometry—the ability to divine information solely by touching an object—destroy any chance of a real relationship, he’s joined the forces of Good hoping to gain some control.  But when the mysterious ghost of a recently dead woman shows up at the Lovecraft Café, he and his mentor must figure out how she fits into a nefarious plot involving the cultists rights movement, a large wooden fish, and the forces of Darkness crushing on him

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Tuesday, September 16, 2008

Ike: In Words

Well folks, things are starting to get back to normal in Houston. Some of the grocery stores are opening up, although most everything else is still closed. My mother remains without power, but my grandfather got his power back. My job has decided that it’s best if we continue on with classes, which I will admit I’m actually anxious to get back to /doing/ something and being around people, but I’m not so anxious to make the drive with the little gas I have left.

Anyway so your report in words. I left my home Wednesday evening, packing up the house, myself and the cats and went inland to Sugarland. I wasn’t under a mandatory evacuation then, however as Ike’s projected path turned to a direct hit I got a call at 7am informing me that my zip code was now under mandatory evacuation. I was glad I’d left early, I avoided the traffic. Houston was much better prepared this time, so there wasn’t the insanity of the long traffic jams Rita caused.

At first as the storm started to come in Friday, I really kinda thought: wow, lots of storm surge but this wind isn’t much worse than a Houston rain storm. It was surprising. You could hear gusts of wind, but there wasn’t a drop of rain. That lasted until around 11pm, when the power started to flicker. I finished watching Monk, my favorite tv show (by that point I was sick of Hurricane broadcast) and just as the show ended, the power went out. My mother was still asleep upstairs, so I sat downstairs listening as the gusts of wind turned to wailing gusts, and the windows rattled. However, it was still fairly calm. Again, I’ve heard worse with the rain squalls.

So I went upstairs, tucked the cats into the room so they could be easily ‘caught’ and tried to go to sleep. The worst part, so far, was that since the power went out the house skyrocketed in heat and humidity within half an hour. I was sticking to the sheets, and simply covered in sweat. Well that’s when the wind really hit. About 2 in the morning we started hearing thuds and clangs from the roof, and a roaring freight train sound all around the house. Green light kept flashing into the room from the blown transformers and they boomed like small explosions. My mother and I decided that now was the time to go downstairs, since it sounded like something was being ripped off the roof or about to come through the roof. The rest of the night was spent hovered around a radio, listening to the house groan around us as the windows rattled. We also lost some siding around the windows, so ended up having to place towels around the windows to prevent water from leaking all over the floor. Every time I looked outside, you’d see this… swirl of white all around. Imagine standing in the center of the flushing toilet bowl, and what that would look like. I was able to see this because the park behind my mother kept power a good deal of the night, letting us see the storm’s fury. This wild wind continued until near sunrise,  we never got the eye.

At sunrise we were able to finally poke our heads outside, discover my mother’s roof  shingles were now lawn ornamentation and her new Hardy Plank had been pulled off outside the windows and actually snapped in half! Now, the OLD siding that she was told needed replacing? That stayed intact! Trees were down everywhere, turning a residential neighborhood into a passage in the jungle book.

To be continued… later…

Kristen

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Ike: In pictures.

A main freeway into downtown.

Highway 45 near my home, heading to Galveston.

Highway 146 in Seabrook (where I used to live, this heads into Kemah along Trinity Bay)

Outside my own apartment.

The parking lot outside my building.

A wealthy Houston neighborhood near my home.

My friend’s front yard (and their neighbor’s house).

Hilton Hotel on Nasa Road 1.

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